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September 8, 2012
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Note: This Fakemon will be Redrawn Again Soon!
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*11/30/12 - Repose and Redesign... Name may change...
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Falcrain
Waterbird Pokémon
Water/Fighting Type
Ability: Torrent
5'03" 130lbs
Description: With the mastery of it tails, it now attacks with it in great power and speed.
Evolution
Crainee (Lv.16) ▸ Gruiken (Lv.36) ▸ Falcrain
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~JoeBuenoA Nov 30, 2012
Hey, I love most of your designs, but I think you have some difficulties regarding starters; especially the Fire starters (neither the dog or the bear sloth are proper starters) and the final stage of the Water line.

This one is just so bad, sorry. Here are my reasons:
- It does not look as fierce and powerful as a 3rd stage starter should. His pose and facial expression are just so dull. GRUIKEN has fierceful features that could have been exploited.
- You've transformed the beak of CRAINEE and GRUIKEN into a smile, leaving the beak for that kind of mask. It's weird to have such a change of mouth.
- The round simple head does not really resemble any sort of animal or whatsoever. It rather resembles a bald man. I have nothing against bald men, but such an antropomorphic feature is not suitable for Pokémons.

It's just my opinion. I do not mean to sound harsh and sorry if I do. I really like your designs.
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Mood: Optimism *Tophat-21 Dec 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
whoa... you're good at this critique stuff... Yeah, I had difficulties in the fire starter (I mean I don't like both of them and eventually got tired of designing.) Yeah, the pose sucks, not sure about the mouth (I think Archeops has no beak). And it does looks like a bald man in this pose or design.:D Thanks for this awesome comment and for making me want to redesign this. :D
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~JoeBuenoA Dec 1, 2012
I'll keep watching your designs and tell u my opinions towards them :)

Keep on :)
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~LiamIsASpy Nov 30, 2012
i agree completely. I hate being negative on your page cuz your work is so good! I was hoping for a empoleon figure with the sword theme of Samurott. I also think he should have a beak. i mean, its based off of a bird. Right now, Falcrain just looks like a taller form of Gruiken. I love this evolution line too, just i was hoping for a better finale :/
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*Tophat-21 Dec 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
sorry for disappointing...
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Mood: Joy ~LiamIsASpy Dec 1, 2012
don't be its you're design and if you like it thats all it matters :)
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~Critizen21 Nov 19, 2012
PingGUA (suggestion)
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*Tophat-21 Nov 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
penguin?
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~Critizen21 Nov 22, 2012
yeah, haha it look like a penguin for me
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~dargo94 Nov 10, 2012
oh and name suggestion.. Aquwakk. like aquq, and the sound a chicken makes.
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